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Teen Poetry #7

I want to know

Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2006-04-20 10:19 PM

Why do I fell this way?
I have all I ever wanted
But yet I’m still not satisfied
I still want something more
I want to be loved and appreciated
Not thrown aside like yesterday’s newspaper
I want to have a real smile on my face
Not this fake pasted on one
I want to know what it is like to be happy
I want to know what it is like to be cared for
I want to know…..

I don't know much at all, I don't know wrong from right, All I know is that I love you tonight
-Good Charlotte

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-04-23 09:21 PM

I really like this poem it reminds me about me. I just got out (well a couple of months ago) of a relationship. and now i feel so alone.
But nice poem keep it up

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2006-04-23 09:22 PM

I really like this poem it reminds me about me. I just got out (well a couple of months ago) of a relationship. and now i feel so alone.
But nice poem keep it up

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-04-23 09:34 PM

Hey cherry, you posted twice and sorry about your break up. Linsay, this could have flown a lot better. When I read this, I didn't feel anything that a poem with a topic like this should make you feel. It didn't have all the emotion that it could of had and you spelled one or two things wrong. I know that you have been a member of pip for longer than me and I might sound like I'm talking down to you or something, but thats not how it's intended. How's South Dakota this time of year?

Jessica

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