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Teen Poetry #7

Where I'm Standing

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

0 posted 2006-04-19 10:27 PM

From where I'm standing,
I can see him smiling...
His arms wrapped around me,
and my heart undenying.
The look in his eyes,
has got me trapped in deep...
and the more I think about it,
the longer I think I'll keep.
I know that if I fall,
he'll be right there...
to catch me in time,
memories in mid-air.
Laughs, tears, and scars,
have made a scary landing...
but all I can see is him smiling,
from where I'm standing.

From where I'm standing,
I can see him smiling...
his arms wrapped around her
and her heart undenying.
The look in his eyes,
has got her trapped in deep...
the more she thinks about it,
the longer he will keep.
She thinks that if she falls,
he'll be right there...
to catch her in time...
memories made in mid-air.
Their hands joined together,
make an unbreakable landing...
but all I see is his smile,
from where I'm standing.

Written 12-02-05

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-04-19 11:00 PM

You wrote this in December of '05. Why did you wait so long to post it? It's very good. I like how you organized it. Just two paragraph like things. Thats cool. Nice write.

Jessica

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-04-19 11:04 PM

hey thanks for you comment... um... I've only been a member since the beginning of this year.. about february or march.. and I have a collection of about 75 poems.. i'm just picking some out and posting little by little.. i don't want to post them all at the same time..lol

ttyl
~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Junebug
Junior Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 40
earth

3 posted 2006-04-23 01:08 AM

OH wow this one absolutly rocked! I loved it..thats like one of the best poems i've read..it all just worked lol! but yeah it rocks!

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