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musicalfusion
Junior Member

since 2006-04-12

Posts 14
manchester uk

0 posted 2006-04-12 04:26 PM

Oh how I miss you
With all my heart I do
With all my soul and more
I lied I lied to myself
I told myself I hated you
That was far from the truth
The truth is I love you

Oh how I love you
With all my mind I do
With all my feelings and more
If I could see you once more
I would tell you how much you meant
How much you meant to me
The truth is I want to hold you

I want to be with you
My heart is longing for you
That’s what I’d tell you
That’s what you mean to me
Maybe we’ll meet again
But for now all I want to say is I’m waiting
I’m waiting to see you

R.E.M.

BlackEyedBueaty07
Junior Member

since 2006-04-05

Posts 27
rittman, ohio

1 posted 2006-04-12 06:01 PM

that was very good, i can relate to this very much so

-kerry-

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2006-04-12 08:22 PM

Welcome to Piptalk.

I can also relate. Just a little though. The organization is good. I don't think that there are any spelling mistakes. Really nice write.

Thanx
Jessica

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-04-13 01:04 AM

Hey,

let me be the second, i think, to welcome you to pip!

Awesome poem btw, and like Jessica said, beautiful setup.

There are one or two spots where i thought it lost the flow, but other than that this is an amazing poem.

Can't wait to see more from you!

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musicalfusion
Junior Member

since 2006-04-12

Posts 14
manchester uk

4 posted 2006-04-14 07:23 AM

thanx for your comments guys there really encouraging
rachel
xx

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

5 posted 2006-04-16 11:02 PM

Stargal mentioned me again! yay! lol! I'm so happy!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

6 posted 2006-04-17 11:48 PM

Jessica - The reason i mention you so much is cause you have great ideas, hope you don't think i'm stealing your moves

musicalfusion - When are you going to post more?!?! I can't wait!

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ShelbyLynn13
Member

since 2006-02-15

Posts 73
US, Colorodo

7 posted 2006-04-21 03:12 PM

welcome 2 PIP great write! and jessica u r so immature

every one is special in their own way!!!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

8 posted 2006-04-21 05:49 PM

I know this has nothing to do with the poem and i apologize musicalfusion but...

ShelbyLynn13 - What is up with the name calling? Correct me if i'm wrong but isn't that pretty much banned from piptalk? No offence to you or anyone else, but Jessica is also my friend and i don't appreciate reading insults towards her.

musicalfusion
Junior Member

since 2006-04-12

Posts 14
manchester uk

9 posted 2006-04-21 06:04 PM

guys if you have problems with each other then keep it out of here plz i just think it's a bit pathetic were all mature here and your acting like little kids anything anyone says which is just a tiny bit offending starts a big massive argument were all poets we should get along .anyway thanx 4 all the comments i really enjoy reading all your veiws

*****Rachel*****

musicalfusion
Junior Member

since 2006-04-12

Posts 14
manchester uk

10 posted 2006-04-21 06:09 PM

p.s thats not directed at all of you

*****Rachel*****

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