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You are the Waves of the sea
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You are the Waves of the sea |
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acid_tears_i_cry Junior Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 24United States, UT |
The morning light has come, so I flee from the dark You keep me holding on, you hold the key to my heart. and Im walking in reason but Im lost in my soul, Trying to let my heart take control and Im sailing the waters...sailing into my dreams and you are the waves of the sea. and Im walking in reason but I'm lost in my soul...trying to let my heart take control and Im sailing the waters...sailing into my dreams and you are the waves...oh you are the waves...and you are the waves of the sea. Written By: Malinda Peterson This is a song I wrote for my ex bf Isaac...Hope you enjoy. Can you read the word "loneliness" and not think of a dark room? |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
WONDERFULL....CURIOUSE i'm looking for you...always... |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
'and Im walking in reason but Im lost in my soul, Trying to let my heart take control' beautiful! please keep writing. --kelly |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi, I really enjoyed this poem, just the wording in it was so very beautiful! The only think I dislike is the set up, I believe that the words are all in the correct places, just you need to … like stanzas is what I’m getting at I believe. Stanzas would be awesome. I don’t know much about songs, but this is amazing! The morning light has come, So I flee from the dark You keep me holding on, You hold the key to my heart. Beautiful wording right there, good job Hope to see more soon! @-->--- |
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