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Teen Poetry #7

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the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

0 posted 2006-04-09 11:08 PM

I just wrote this tonight so I haven't had time to "fix" anything that I didn't really like but just tell me what you think.

Fall and tell me if it hurts
landing in my arms.
Cry and tell me how it feels
to believe your safe from harm.

Listen and let me know
what it is you hear.
Speak and tell me the things
that will help me keep you near.

Run away from you fears
and tell me what you find.
Search for your meaning
but don't leave me too far behind.

Find who you are
and where you want to be.
I'll still be right beside you
when you find your destiny.

Listen to your heart
feel the beat of mine.
Hold my hand so dearly
a moment froze in time.

Be what you are
not what people see.
Cry a thousand rivers
to feel eternity.

Love me with everything you know.
Speak with everything you feel.
Hold me with everything you are
just to show, my everything is real.

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

1 posted 2006-04-10 09:09 AM

that was great
i loved it!
smiles
me

Mysilentsaviour25
Junior Member

since 2006-04-10

Posts 12
California

2 posted 2006-04-10 04:20 PM

I really like this poem. I maybe try some different words, bigger words if you know wat i mean

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