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Teen Poetry #7

Love

BlackEyedBueaty07
Junior Member

since 2006-04-05

Posts 27
rittman, ohio

0 posted 2006-04-08 08:41 PM

Just a girl

by: Kerry Cookro
To: Vince

Looking out the window
On a cloudy day
Watching you walk away

You aren't leaving for good
At least not me
That's what i heard
But i wish i didnt see

The dream i had last night
When you left my side
And now i think your gonna leave for good
Alone

Looking at you
You looking at me
Wishing you didnt see
The pain in my eyes.

Everytime its quiet
I think your gonnna leave
And now i wish i didnt see

The dream i had last night
When you left me
You left my side
And now i think your gonna leave me for good
Alone

And as you kiss me softly
Holding me in your arms
But i still wish i didnt have that dream

But as i look into your eyes
I relize your gonna stay

So i cry
I cry of joy
Because i know now
that you love me
That im your world.

But dont focuse on me too much
im just a girl

Looking out the window
On a cloudy day
Watching you walk my way

------this is one of my songs, yeah i know, this is a site for poems, but i like to share my poems, songs, and quotes with you all!------

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-04-08 08:47 PM

Its sweet that you want to share all that with us. In your stanzas you could have a better pattern going on. Like you have blah many lines per stanza or something.

Jessica

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

2 posted 2006-04-19 11:17 PM

It maybe a song but it was great.

*leah

ShelbyLynn13
Member

since 2006-02-15

Posts 73
US, Colorodo

3 posted 2006-04-21 03:40 PM

i agree with jess

every one is special in their own way!!!

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