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Don't abuse this power...
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Don't abuse this power... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
Beneath this popular descise Is a personality. Not just the most popular girl in school, Or the most beautiful, Untouchable person you have seen, But an actual person. Someone with a creative side, With hopes and dreams. Besides becoming prom queen. But a curious human who wants to explore you, Who wants to explore this world. I am someone who makes sure to hide themselves, To stay protected from the deceitful people. I am someone who makes sure not to bare my soul, For i am scared that it will get taken away from me. Someone with feelings, Secrets, Wants and needs. Someone who is interested. I have been observing this world And learning from your wrongs. I am someone of whom you can relate to. Someone who knows the truths and lies underneath all your front. It’s now getting too much. As it has now become to long that these thoughts have been pondering in my mind. I do not want to loose this curiosity. I want to stay and observe And so I turn to you. To break my descise, To look into me. And want for you to see ME. You now have the tools to open me up And unfold me to yourself, To the world Don’t abuse this power. i'm looking for you...always... |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
I don’t know what to say but great poem. I mean I can’t really relate to it because I’m more open to people and I’m not popular. And you said you could barely write a descent poem. That’s a lie, you’re good. So just believe in yourself. *leah We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom. |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Nice. The stanzas could have been evened out more. I can kinda relate to you. I am popular but I'm not afraid to show who I really am. Don't be afraid to sho your true colors. Jessica |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
Thankyou guys. for you to understand were i'm coming froem i will tell you... i wrote this poem from the heart. when i was younger i used to be myself infront of everyone and was not popular. now i show my true colours. no doubt. it's just sometimes you hve to roll with the crowd to be popular. you have to make sure to be yourself but then not to over the top. well that is how it is here in england. i'm babbling again.sorry. thankyou for your interest, smiles me i'm looking for you...always... |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
I think that’s how it is every where. I’m glad I’m not popular. I have friends that are cool in my eyes and that like me for how I am. There’s nothing better then that. *leah P.S.) your truly yourself with me right? Well you don’t have to worry about being any one else with me, I don’t judge. |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou very much, yes leah i am 100 percent true to you. don't worry you are lucky to have a mind like yours i like it you have something special. smiles, curiouse i'm looking for you...always... |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Thanx for explaining that a little better. You don't babble. Its good that your more open now and a cool thing about this website is it can be all your own. You don't have to tell your friends about it and then not be able to write how you truly feel about some things 'cause you act differently around her/him or something. Now that is babbling. Nice write. Jessica |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
that is totally were i'm coming from jessica. thankyou, smiles, me i'm looking for you...always... |
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