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sometimesitslonely Junior Member
since 2005-12-27
Posts 41USA |
I feel so broken Life is very cold now, My guitar plays the same song, My fingers are now numb. I am extremely tired Life is on repeat, I hear your voice- I keep falling… **What** would you do, Without my love Probably nothing at all So unwillingly it is. ((Tomorrow)) is years away from now, So let’s relax for a moment, Like there’s nothing between us, But I’m sure there always will be. This smile is fake, |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
kinda confusing... |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
i love it. yes it could be a little confusing but everyone can infere it the way they want. well done,keep posting. curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
Great poem I agree with curiouse. Nice work *leah |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
It is a little confusing. Maybe you could clear that up? it was good and would be better if it made more sence. Jessica |
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