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aliway
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since 2006-03-05
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With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-04-03 05:47 PM


My whole life I dreamed
of being someone else
Today I realized I
was dreaming of myself

I’m not a singer
I’m not a player
I’m a writer, an artist
Thinker and a dreamer
Always looking at life
And always asking why

I’m not a trouble maker
I’m not the person all wish to be
I’m shy and quiet
Just the way I like it
My friends look at me
always see the nice girl
someone you can talk to

so don’t come to me
asking me to change
for I like me just the way I am
some day I hope
you will feel the same way

We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom.

*DWIGHT D. EISENHOWER*

[This message has been edited by aliway (04-04-2006 12:08 PM).]

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bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
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1 posted 2006-04-03 06:01 PM


thats right. be who you are dont let no one change you.
good job.  i enjoyed this

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
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england
2 posted 2006-04-04 03:47 AM


it sound like you don't need to change.
wonderfull poem,
curiouse

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3 posted 2006-04-08 07:26 PM


And your a great writer at that. Nice write.

                    Jessica

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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4 posted 2006-04-08 07:39 PM


I love this whole thing! There is not one single spot I would change.

Proud to be a writer

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aliway
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since 2006-03-05
Posts 185
With in your eyes
5 posted 2006-04-09 12:22 PM


Thank you
My face is so red from reading what you all said about my poem.
Thank you again!!

*leah

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