Teen Poetry #7 |
how i am |
aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
My whole life I dreamed of being someone else Today I realized I was dreaming of myself I’m not a singer I’m not a player I’m a writer, an artist Thinker and a dreamer Always looking at life And always asking why I’m not a trouble maker I’m not the person all wish to be I’m shy and quiet Just the way I like it My friends look at me always see the nice girl someone you can talk to so don’t come to me asking me to change for I like me just the way I am some day I hope you will feel the same way We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom. *DWIGHT D. EISENHOWER* [This message has been edited by aliway (04-04-2006 12:08 PM).] |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
thats right. be who you are dont let no one change you. good job. i enjoyed this |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
it sound like you don't need to change. wonderfull poem, curiouse |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
And your a great writer at that. Nice write. Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I love this whole thing! There is not one single spot I would change. Proud to be a writer @-->--- |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
Thank you My face is so red from reading what you all said about my poem. Thank you again!! *leah |
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