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Teen Poetry #7

Kurt Cobain

sometimesitslonely
Junior Member

since 2005-12-27

Posts 41
USA

0 posted 2006-04-02 08:54 PM

I came across your old song to day
"Smells Like Teen Spirit"
I used to listen to it,
it kept me from killing myself.
But you did it anyways.

In the words of Neil Young-
"It's better to burn out,
then to fade away"
too damn bad your wife didn't believe that.

The king is gone,
but he's not forgotten,
just another rich guy,
with too much time on his hands.

I'm sorry I don't pity you,
guess you really don't care,
you got where you needed,
are you happy you sped up death?

This smile is fake,
These tears aren't.

mgoodman1989
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

1 posted 2006-04-02 09:15 PM

Good write, The reader can really sense that you were... perhaps angry/disapointed about the entire Kurt Cobain thing. A fan? .... Good Job!!

Michelle

the_hoodANDsheild
Junior Member

since 2006-03-08

Posts 25
Canada

2 posted 2006-04-02 10:11 PM

Thats awsome! I can really share your feelings on this one. I also liked Kurt and Neil Young. Its neat how you used them in your poem.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-04-03 12:46 PM

i dont get, but it seems nice.

Jessica

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

4 posted 2006-04-12 09:50 PM

Is a cool poem.

*Leah

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