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Teen Poetry #7

I Know

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-03-26 07:50 PM

I know you love me
I know you care
I know that as long as I live you will always be there
I know that you see me through good times and bad
I know that you want me to meet you up there
I know that you have picked me out
I know that I should feel special and not live in doubt
and I know that I should be walking with you right now but I don't feel your hand locked in mine
I don't feel safe every night and I cant quite figure out why my life sucks so bad!

but I will leave it for now and just know that I want you so very bad!!!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-03-30 04:06 PM

Wow... Umm... I read this like 5x! trying to figure out who you were talking about, the best guess i could come up with is God or a boyfriend? lol

This was a great poem, it changed so suddenly! It was like one moment i was reading how you trust and stuff, and the next *bAm!* you talk about how bad life is... I love this poem! It is one for my library for sure!

Thanks for sharing, and thanks for the email

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Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2006-03-31 12:58 PM

hey oh yeah you were right it is about God ... sorry i should of said

thanks for replying

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

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