Teen Poetry #7 |
made up my mind |
littlemiss Junior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 16 |
I made up my mind today That this just can’t go on I’m sick of these games you play I’m out the door I’m gone You’ve messed with my head and broken my soul With all thatyou’ve said It’s finally taking it’s toll Before me you stand Eyes aglow, smile gleaming Heart in your hand I must be dreaming It’s just another sick trick With you I’ll never win It’s no good I’m fading quick I’ll admit defeat and give in So this is where I say farewell Though it’s killing me inside I hope you realise your putting me through hell But I won’t let you take my pride So on that note I’ll walk away With my head held high Although I’m torn into pieces today Tomorrow I might fly. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"So on that note I’ll walk away With my head held high Although I’m torn into pieces today Tomorrow I might fly." I loved that last stanza so much. Good for you for walking away from someone like this. ~Alli~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
"I made up my mind today That this just can’t go on I’m sick of these games you play I’m out the door I’m gone" This stanza was amazing! I love the whole poem, but my favorite stanzas have to be the first and the last Great job! Keep posting, i look forward to seeing more poems from you. @-->--- |
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