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ahiru
New Member

since 2006-01-05

Posts 7

0 posted 2006-02-05 08:26 PM

It is almost like you died of cancer
the cells slowly took over.
I couldn’t understand.
What was happening to my best friend?

Times definition erased
It just slowly stretched on
the tumor growing bigger,
Our contact divided
by a sea of your fake reality.

Psychosis?
No, that is too simple an escape.
You are so difficult.
How can I use cancer as a metaphor,
when being forgotten is nothing like a disease.

The New Year passed and with it something new
I know me but I don’t have you...
or us.
We were one person
How can a person live when they are split in two?

A heated conversation,
the scalpel made the incision.
It unleashed your two faced demon,
and my hurt but hopeful heart.

I am not properly stitched up,
my wounds won’t seal.
The scabs keep tearing,
With each old memory emerging…

Do you remember
Green face paint, blue eye shadow, white wine,
a simple lullaby, black hair, crimson lips,
My voice in your ear, twirling dresses,
camera lenses, stupid boys,
and Hollywood kisses?

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

1 posted 2006-02-06 04:05 PM

Nice poem and if I havent alrdy sed it- Welcome to PIP!!!

I still wish I was a movie star, even though its hard sometimes. Awesome poem and keep it up!

XxnoraxX

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2006-03-07 09:20 PM

me too. wonderful poem. if you change the words around a bit it could be a song. i dont think i've read any of your other work so.. Welcome to pip

           Jessica

    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

ShelbyLynn13
Member

since 2006-02-15

Posts 73
US, Colorodo

3 posted 2006-03-23 05:17 PM

might be alittle late but welcome to PIP and awesome write!

every one is special in their own way!!!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-03-23 05:34 PM

Wow... i'm just going to say this was an amazing poem! I loved how you compared it to cancer, but than changed your mind during the course of the stanzas. It just made so much sense to me!

Thanks for sharing

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*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2006-03-23 06:17 PM

Yes, amazing write.

~Alli~

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