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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533
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God? Are you really listening? God? Are you realy there? I want to trust you but I don't feel you anywhere I pray and ask you To wrap your arms around me I feel nothing God? do you really love me? I go to church and listen For what you may be saying God? Where are you? Is what I keep on praying Lord, show me you're here and that you care for me alone 'Cause God, I want to be excited to come home |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I'm not really a religious person or anything, but I sometimes feel like this too. Really good write. I would just suggest going back and fixing some spelling errors, etc. that you have made. And don't worry, I'm sure God is listening and loves you very much.  ~Alli~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This poem i can really relate to right now. I seem to be asking myself all the time if God is really there! The answer is yes, just sometimes you get so down you don't feel like it. He does care for you, and even when you feel like he's not listening he is. Just sometimes it takes him longer to answer some of your questions than you think it should. He has a plan for you though. Nice write, i really enjoyed it. @-->--- |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Hmm....yes i feel the same way! its hard to hear people tell you that He does...coz you feel like you need Him to tell you through His way  hope that helped ya ... very emotional write....you did a great job with fiting in what you feel......lovely x0x0 |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
thanks for the comments everyone : ) |
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