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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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0 posted 2006-03-22 09:07 AM



Friend, is a someone that you can trust with your deepest secrets.
Friends are the kind of people that you have fun and laugh with.
They are the people that go through the same pain as you, but you guys stick together nomatter what happens.
A friend is someone that's by your side 100% anytime you're going through a rough time.
The most important thing you must see before you make up your mind is, willl this person stab you in the back, or even pretend that your friendship was just a joke?
So go find that friend that does everthing right instead of everthing wrong.
But for me, I don't know what to do now?
If you have a clue tell me.
I don't know if we can fiz what ever was undone/
But obviosly you don't care.
Since it was you that was wrong.

         cherrys_ rule
(I don't care if this is a poem, it's just what i came up with cuz me and my friends just ended our friendship and this is what came out.)

~ you might have scars all over your body but what about the ones engraved in your memories~

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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
1 posted 2006-03-22 10:02 AM


i am in the exact same situation as you right now and feel the same way.It's nice to know that there is someone who is going through the same thing. hopefully,in time our hearts will heal your words were taken in deeply. with love

faiza
xxxxxxx

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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2 posted 2006-03-22 10:41 AM


Ending friendships are so hard! I can relate to this really well right now.
It might not be a poem, but it expresses what you feel, which is cool.

Keep writing~

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*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2006-03-22 07:09 PM


Yep, I can really relate to this poem too, and I think you did a nice job.
I enjoy reading what you write very much. Keep posting.

~Alli~

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