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Teen Poetry #7

BUT DO YOU?

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2006-03-06 10:35 PM

Miss you so much
Think of you so often
Love you so dearly

I want you to mean it
when you say you love me

but do you?

I want you to mean it
when you put your soft lips against mine

but do you?

I want you to mean it
when you sing me to sleep

but do you?

I want you to mean it
when you look into my eyes

but do you?

I want you to mean it
when you say you love me

but do you?

how did you break my heart when it wasn't whole to start?

aol sn- tearsoflove13762

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-03-06 11:05 PM

its good. if you come across mine i wrote one like this please comment. i like poems that repeat something every stanza. or whatever. nice work

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-03-07 12:19 PM

Nice poem!
It reads really nice.
I think a lot of people feel that way when their in relationships, so almost everyone can relate to what you wrote…

The repeating thing… well… I won’t say anything, everyone has their own style, I guess I don’t fall into this particular one.

I don’t know much about poetry, I just know what I try to write, so you might like to ignore my post

Although I really did enjoy your poem.

@-->---

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2006-03-07 08:47 PM

Wow I can relate to this so much, awesome work.

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