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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
looking up into the sky holding my hand and wiping my eyes thinking that i might just survive and of some of the good things about being alive that moment soon fades and i become lost and start my old ways if only i could move on and be happy again i try change but only ever really end up in the same situation again just to be free and find the real me and to make my dream a reality its impossible i know but its a deep need one that i don't think will ever be freed hopefully next time my moment wont fade so fast and it wont seem like it was just some old piece of wasted time! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am 60 and the real me is just getting found, is that any help to you?  Keep searching, its the journey that is worth the effort, and oh, the rewards are wonderful! Nice Write! |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
awesome poem. I rly liked it. Thanks sooo much. XxnoraxX |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Hay thank you both for your replys! does it really take that long???...oh no  once again thanx x0x0 Free_Spirit07 |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
i have to agree with nora. its really nice.  Jessica |
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