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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
why do i live? live my life without this why do i cry? only to wipe my eyes why do i blink? only to open my eyes and find out i missed the sun rise why does this world lie? cant we all see what's in front of our eyes? why not just say it how it is? then to make up one big lie that could possibly muck up our life's what's so hard? why is there always one twist in everybody's lives? did God not make this life of yours good enough that you would have no chores? did He not make it perfect for us? oh yes,yes he did but we have got ourselves to blame for this we lie we cry but we never see why we never take that moment to realize that we could change that we could open our eyes we are real yes, yes we are but one day we will slowly fade away we would take that last breath and think about how we could of changed we all can do this, deep down we all know this but one of us is scared one of us has experienced to much fear is it me? am I the one who is holding us all up? or is it you? maybe one day we would see maybe one day we would be till then till this day I love you all if its you if your scarred come to me I really know that this will be that we could make this world Gods dream! |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
great. maybe you should make where the reader stop where you want the reader to stop a little more obvious, maybe? good job Jessica |
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