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Teen Poetry #7

Nick 2

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-03-04 10:45 PM

What was so hard? all you hade to do is stand by my side
i'v waited my whole life just to know and for you to say you love me
but that's to hard obviously coz its just gone back to how it used to be

I'v given up and im coming down
I still don't know why you had to lie
im your sister so I have to ask why
but your not around to hear my cry

I should of known but it happened again
I cant believe that you gave me this pain
goodbye Nick i'll leave you now to get on with your other plans
coz you have completed one now you've got a few others!
and then maybe you'll see what you've done to me....

would love some feed back! (this is about my brother)

x0x0
Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-03-04 10:49 PM

cool. The first one was good and now there is another one. awsome

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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