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The Ice Queen
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The Ice Queen |
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Broken*~*Angel New Member
since 2006-02-27
Posts 6 |
The Ice Queen The frigid fortress of your heart You can not stand to part Slave to hates unfaithful kiss Demon to earthly bliss Alone and hollow Where hate leads you follow Oh Ice Queen in your tower high Alone you wish to die So none can hear you cry But the winds broken sigh Your blood an icy blue Your mind took wings and flew But returned by a snowstorm Angered by its wretched form You took quick blade of ice And cut yourself thrice Oh Ice Queen in your lonesome night Your heart cry’s out in fright But silent you your lips bite Afraid of another’s light But behind the ice flickers a spark To bring you from the dark Take my hand I hold it out From the shadows you shall hear my shout Of loves faithful kiss Come to the earthly world of bliss Oh Ice Queen in crumbling tower tall Take the chance, dare to fall Stand and no longer crawl For I am here to heed your call |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
Awesome first post, I'm lucky to welcome you to pip. Very well done. |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Frist of all Welcome to pip! Sencond of all I like your poem. Its very nice. a great start to a great time at pip. Nice writing!  xoxo |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Welcome to pip!  Amazing first piece.... very deep in it's word and thought process. What was the inspiration? How long did this piece take you? Once again, congratulations on a great piece.  ~Daniel?Titus Fighting the good fight, deployed to Iraq. |
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