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ShelbyLynn13 Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 73US, Colorodo |
"R.escue me from this horrid depression. was it my fault?" this crosses the mind of every victim of rape. A.fter the crime has been commited, the rapist runs and flees leaving the victim expossed and screaming 4 mercy. P.erhaps she should tell perhaps she should run and hide and wish she was dead. E.xcuse this crime? put it in the back of all the fake Micheal Jackson trials? I don't think so, any woman who has been a victim of rape, the rapist should be executed. p.s. i don't know anyone who has been raped. i just felt like writing this.   every one is special in their own way!!! |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
Woah-this is GREAT!!! Excelalnt job and it flows rly nicly- i luv reading your poems and stories so keep up the awesome work! XoXo, |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
wow..wow..thats good that you yourself wern't raped but this stuff really happens in life every day millions of people get raped not just females but men too great write Jessica P.S. you think Michael Jackson is inocent? Where your heart lays is where you belong. |
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ShelbyLynn13 Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 73US, Colorodo |
thanx for the replies you guys! and latteaddict213 i'm not saying that micheal jackson is innocent. but look his trials come before anybody else's case did. thanx again!!!!! every one is special in their own way!!! |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
okay. but do you think he is innocent? |
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ShelbyLynn13 Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 73US, Colorodo |
no every one is special in their own way!!! |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
k |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Sorry i have to add i agree, "HE IS NOT INNOCENT" And why can money pay your way out of things you have done? Agh man he makes me SICK!!!!!!!!!!!! x0x0 |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
oOPs 4got 2 add.....great write ...... i...oh don't worry i like this x0x0 |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
lol Free that was funny how u forgot to write the...ah never mind..but it was funny lol and Free's right- just cause he has an indoor zoo and is filthy rich doesnt mean hes innocent- and not only does he make me sick but his face does too ok im done XoXo, |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Fanks Nora, umm i was gnna say something but i didnt think i should.....c0z im 2 scared 2! But anyways ......... fanks x0x0 |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
your welcome lol XoXo, |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Try and keep the discussion on the poem, everyone.  ~Daniel/Titus Fighting the good fight, deployed to Iraq. |
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ShelbyLynn13 Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 73US, Colorodo |
wow i made a disscusion! : :every one is special in their own way!!! |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
lol what do you think this is Shelby? Jessica |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
Great piece. I like how you made it about the topic but began with each letter of the word rape. Truly creative.. Hope to see more ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
yeah. I agree it is a gret acronim (or however you spell it) xoxo |
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