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XxnoraxX
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0 posted 2006-02-18 10:11 PM



I look in the mirror and want to know what i see?
I see a girl who has so much to learn, so much yet to see

I want to travel a lot when im older
Meet new people and grow strong and bolder

When I look in the mirror at me
I see what no one can see

I see a girl with the darkest hair
Who knows whats wrong and whats fair

I see a girl with the grayest eyes
Who wants to complete all lifes scary rides

This girl that I see is weak and young
But soon, she'll be bold and strong

I know I can go a long way
and I know I listen to everything I say

Words are to laugh, play, and sing
but actions are for doing

Now as I walk away from this mirror I sense
Someone with much more confidence

-Hope you liked it

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

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1 posted 2006-02-19 01:13 PM


Its great! wonderful! amazing!

            

Where your heart lays is where you belong.

byski
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2 posted 2006-02-19 01:43 PM


Liked it indeed. I like how your writing is so easy to read, I don't have to pause and guess at the rhythem at all.
XxnoraxX
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3 posted 2006-02-19 07:04 PM


Latt- i luv hearing from u- thanks for replying
Byski- i luv hearing from u 2- thanks for replying

Have a great day guys

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

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