Teen Poetry #7 |
As I Look In The Mirror |
XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
I look in the mirror and want to know what i see? I see a girl who has so much to learn, so much yet to see I want to travel a lot when im older Meet new people and grow strong and bolder When I look in the mirror at me I see what no one can see I see a girl with the darkest hair Who knows whats wrong and whats fair I see a girl with the grayest eyes Who wants to complete all lifes scary rides This girl that I see is weak and young But soon, she'll be bold and strong I know I can go a long way and I know I listen to everything I say Words are to laugh, play, and sing but actions are for doing Now as I walk away from this mirror I sense Someone with much more confidence -Hope you liked it XoXo, |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Its great! wonderful! amazing! Where your heart lays is where you belong. |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
Liked it indeed. I like how your writing is so easy to read, I don't have to pause and guess at the rhythem at all. |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
Latt- i luv hearing from u- thanks for replying Byski- i luv hearing from u 2- thanks for replying Have a great day guys XoXo, |
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