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This Kind Of Girl
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This Kind Of Girl |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
If you want a girl whos quiet and nice dont even go near me If you want a girl whos loud and out of control I'll be there If you want a kind blond get away before its to late If you want a naughty girl I'll be here Im the kind of girl that no one can control has the grayest eyes,black hair, and wild soul My teachers blame me for everything Im the one whos leads the class singing The principal has had enough of me she left me alone is tired of sending me home My parents call me full of spunk they dont know im full of funk My friends love me the way i am think im wilder then that jerk Sam So just so you know Im the kind of girl whos definitly out of control -XxnoraxX <3 i would love the comments  XoXo, |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
that totally awsome |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
Its great. I used to sing in the back of class too. Man was i a little trouble maker. I liked the flow of the first couple stanzas, with it ending so abruptly. You should have sticked to that throughout the poem or at least ended with it. |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
Thanks you guys- lol yea and im still a troublemaker XoXo, |
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