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Teen Poetry #7

Reborn over the Summer

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-02-17 04:55 PM

All alone and scared
Is what I once was
Broken hearted and unhappy
From my recent loss at love

I was so down, so low
So unbelievably fragile
My friends could not help me
I was alone in my trial

With a nameless emotion
I went to see the show
I hoped I could restart it
My life, my ultimate goal

Who would have thought that
Chance would help me in the end
You practically fell into my arms
You found in me a friend

We both had a history
Full of pain and tears
But we found a new beginning
Together we faced our fears

But deep down we knew
That it would never last
A love cannot fully bloom
In the wake of our aftermath

We were only looking for comfort
And comfort we did find
How sweet it is to understand
That each love is divine

But now we go our separate ways
I keep in touch to remind her
Thank you Dana for your love
Thanks for the awesome summer.

This one means alot to me. I hope it can remind people that after all the loss twomorrow may bring a great surprize.

Unorthodox mabey, but I grow on you.

ShelbyLynn13
Member

since 2006-02-15

Posts 73
US, Colorodo

1 posted 2006-02-17 05:27 PM

wow! you have a very posiyive and bright future in your writing!! i rely wish that we could continue talking. whenever i read one of your posts i just feel connected with you!!!

every one is special in their own way!!!

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

2 posted 2006-02-17 10:55 PM

This is rly rly great
it flowed perfectly
great job and keep it up

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-02-18 12:04 PM

your writing is toching to the heart and I would love to read more!

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2006-02-18 12:40 PM

thank you for the warm responce, and only in one day. I guess i should stop writing so negativly and stick to something like this. But my mood changes everyday. I sent this to the person who i wrote it about and got the same kind of responce, so Ill give it some more attention.

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