Teen Poetry #7 |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
untilted i would propose a test, one of great difficulty, one to answer second guesses and all these sudden impulses. maybe it will show corrections that need to occur. maybe it will show failures that are soon coming. this approach may be more ambigious than you wish, but its the only way i can be sure of uncertainties. the only way i can test the waters without sinking into a sea of misunderstanding. ambigiouty keeps me secure, safe ans sound inside my head. so selfish, neh? so insensitive maybe, but if my feelings spill out of my tupperware bowl, i may never be able to gather my thoughts and emotions. so what shall i do? what could i possibly say to you? i dont have a response, forgive me for this sin. maybe one day i'll know redemption, but for now.........my thoughts remain my own. now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Nice work, Alex. I like your approach in this. Well done! ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks alot for commenting!! now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
redemption......... |
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