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ShelbyLynn13
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since 2006-02-15

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0 posted 2006-02-15 07:47 PM

one day i was standing in the cafeteria josh walks up and says he wants to get me pregnent. i didn't refuse quickley but i didn't say anything. he said that he wasn't going to live to be old enough to see any kids grow up because he had brain cancer. my true love has brain cancer. so i whent home and talked to my mother and asked her what i should do. she told me do what my heart tells me to do and she will support me the whole way.
the next day i told him i will have his baby. that night as you might know we whent to a hotel and had well you know. as he guaranteed he got me pregnent.
through out the pregnency he was there for me. a year later he died. and since then i have remained loyal to my promise and taken care of our beautiful daughter. i was seventeen.
p.s. this isn't me i just haad to get my imagination on paper.

[This message has been edited by ShelbyLynn13 (02-16-2006 07:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2006-02-15 09:00 PM

You or no, true or no, this is as deep as love goes.

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Free_Spirit07
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since 2006-01-29

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2 posted 2006-02-16 12:41 PM

Holy Cow! That went a long way buddy! Good write its good to put your imagination into a possition like that and find out what you would do

I would have the baby TOTALLY!

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byski
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since 2006-01-26

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Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2006-02-17 04:24 PM

You have a strong spirit there. I like the topics that you write on. You really have a good artistic impression on me. But if you want to write a short story, then do so. I'll still love it. I just want to see something with a bit more structure and something that flows. But this is just constructive critisism here, keep it up.

XxnoraxX
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4 posted 2006-02-17 10:51 PM

This is great!!! but so sad. yea i probably would have done the same thing- that was amazing-great job keep it up

p.s. your poems rly rock socks

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latteaddict213

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since 2006-02-17

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Colorado

5 posted 2006-02-18 12:09 PM

You have a great imagination, but don't really know what would happen in a real life situation

ShelbyLynn13
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since 2006-02-15

Posts 73
US, Colorodo

6 posted 2006-02-18 01:12 AM

well i guess that i don't realy know what a person would realy do but that is realy close to what i whent through when i was twelve.

every one is special in their own way!!!

the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26

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7 posted 2006-03-01 08:57 PM

This poem/short story was really great. I love how you put a real life situation in hand on paper. Even thought it wasn't really you. It would be hard to really make this decision in real life..with or with out your heart.
Great write
~Heather

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Want nothing & you will have everything.

latteaddict213

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8 posted 2006-03-01 10:12 PM

Just a question. how did you go through it when you are only thirteen? You are thirteen right? haven't had a B-day or five when I was away?

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

ShelbyLynn13
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since 2006-02-15

Posts 73
US, Colorodo

9 posted 2006-03-04 04:58 PM

no i haven't jessie! i was just saying it was sort of like a acting kind of drama thing!

every one is special in their own way!!!

latteaddict213

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10 posted 2006-03-06 09:13 PM

ohh. okay.

           Jessica
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

stargal
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since 2006-03-06

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11 posted 2006-03-07 06:51 PM

I just wanted to say it's more like a short story than a poem... Or almost a ballad?

I don't know, i just felt like i wasn't really reading a poem!

It was a great idea though
Keep using your imagination!

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ShelbyLynn13
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since 2006-02-15

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US, Colorodo

12 posted 2006-03-21 10:58 AM

gee...... thanx! i think? are you being rude?

every one is special in their own way!!!

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13 posted 2006-03-21 07:06 PM

What a short little love story. Great job!

~Alli~

stargal
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14 posted 2006-03-22 10:24 AM

Ummm... no? Sorry if it seemed like i was being rude, cause i wasn't... next time i'll choose my words better

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