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XxnoraxX
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0 posted 2006-02-11 12:07 PM



I hope you never forget the tapping at your window
With the harsh cold and the jealousy
Running through my bones
We were both selfish, but I think I was more

I don't wanna run away, but I can't take it;
I don't understand.
If I'm not made for you then why does my HEART tell me that I am?

I get lovesick so easily
then all of a sudden i remember the meaness;the jealousy

You've heard me say im sorry
you've heard me cry and beg
you've seen me sitting on my porch
wishing i was dead

I dont want to say goodbye
but i know you wont take me back
i watch you laugh with her
as i sit there and cry

saying goodbye this time, the same old story;
saying goodbye makes me feel like saying sorry



XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

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Free_Spirit07
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since 2006-01-29
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1 posted 2006-02-11 03:34 PM


Love the drift and flow of this, very well writen!

x0x0
Free_Spirit07

fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here!

XxnoraxX
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2 posted 2006-02-13 12:03 PM


Thanks for replying

XoXo,
XxnoraxX

No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3

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3 posted 2006-03-09 02:50 PM


Hey Nora,
This flows extremely well. Very nice.


               ttyl

           Jessica    
            
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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