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Teen Poetry #7

Drinking and Driving

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

0 posted 2006-02-02 05:01 PM

Near to the door
he paused to stand
as he took his class ring
off her hand
all who were watching
did not speak as a silent tear
ran down his cheek
and through his mind
the memories ran
of the moments they walked
and ran in the sand hand and hand
but now her eyes were so terrible cold
for he would never again
have her to hold
they watched in silence
as he bent near
and whispered the words..
"I LOVE YOU" in her ear
he touched her face and started to cry
as he put on his ring and wanted to die
and just then the wind began to blow
as they lowered her casket
into the snow....
this is what happens
to man alive.....
when friends let friends....
drink and drive.

Please dont drink and drive
it can not only kill you
but those that love you
will watch you end your life
hope you liked it
XxnoraxX

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

1 posted 2006-02-02 05:37 PM

Hey
That is so true, yet people still do it! Maybe one day they will get it and stop :@

x0x0
Free_Spirit07

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

2 posted 2006-02-03 01:32 PM

This was a great!

When i finished i was near tears.

jezzika

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

3 posted 2006-02-03 04:42 PM

Thanks for replying guys. I had a friend who's mother died because her father was to drunk but drove anyways. I feel rly bad for her so this is rly dedicated to her mom. When she read it she was crying and told me to post it here so everyone can get the message.

XxnoraxX

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