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sometimesitslonely
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since 2005-12-27
Posts 41
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0 posted 2006-02-02 12:21 PM


I'm over it now,
I've forgiven myself.

I've had tears wept,
I have goals to be met.

Loving wasn't a mistake,
I see that in the breath I make.

When you cried for me,
it hurt but you didn't see.

I'm sorry that I said those things,
and I'm sorry I only have pain to bring.

This smile is fake,
These tears aren't.

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XxnoraxX
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since 2006-01-24
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1 posted 2006-02-03 05:08 PM


this is a really good poem.  when friends or family memebers move away or sumthing u try to be happy for them but u can only show them the pain in you.  excellant poem.

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spaz02
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 74
USA
2 posted 2006-02-03 09:17 PM


well done
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