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Learning from your mothers mistakes !
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Learning from your mothers mistakes ! |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK 
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My first post !! Here goes ! The house becomes a wrestling ring, And I can't do a single thing. First comes the thud, Something falls to the floor, Was it an accident, Does she deserve more? The make-up won't hide, the scars and black eyes, No matter how hard, she tries and tries. Once again she's "tripped down the stairs", People believe her, nobody cares. I watch every time, She takes a punch, When will she learn, Enough is enough. When will people, Finally take note, How many times, Will he grab her throat? They say you learn from your mother's mistakes, What should I be picking up on? How to hide, the flaws and fakes? Where has this tortured soul come from? Belinda Black Aged 14 ! Hope ya like it ! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Belinda! You write incredibly well. But how tragic the truth. I've worked with woman like that as a social worker. I pray your mother finds the strength and self-worth to make the right choices. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A extremely heart-wrenching write and all too familiar for many. Sadly some women never leave thinking they simply can't. The beauty is that their children learn through this to never repeat the cycle of being abused or being an abuser, hopefully! So well done, and so very, very sad. "There's nothing worse that being an aging young person!" - Richard Pryor |
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spaz02 Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 74USA |
OH MY GOD! i absoulty loved this.....it speaks the truth. u r a very deep person. i hope things in your home will heal.. "For every drop of my blood that falls is because of you" ~Spaz02~ |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
Heya thanx 4 all the comments they are much appreciated! please keep them coming ! |
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