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Teen Poetry #7

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littlelauren
Junior Member

since 2005-12-30

Posts 25

0 posted 2006-01-07 08:15 AM

I wake up the next morning
the pain's still there
I wake up the next morning
and I just sit and stare
I try not to cry
I try not to weep
I think about my pain
my wounds so deep

Teenage life is
harder than I thought
I don't know if I can cope
don't wanna get caught
all the things I'm doing
that no-one knows about
I wish I could stop
because I want out
of every bad thing I'm doing
that I regret
I wish I could tell my friends
but they'd fret
please pain just go away
get out of my heart
because it's going cold
the pain is a bad part
of my broken heart

Sexy
Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 53

1 posted 2006-01-07 10:55 PM

u made me cry...its so sad but so true

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2006-01-08 12:31 PM

its good that your expressing your feelings i mean everyone has to in a way but while doing this try to add a twist and not have it so cliche

how did you break my heart when it wasn't whole to start?

aol sn- tearsoflove13762

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