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brokenheart15
New Member

since 2005-12-16

Posts 5
indiana

0 posted 2005-12-27 02:34 PM

I try to forget your name
I try to forget your face
I try to forget the past
cuz its such a big disgrace

I try to move on
I try to find someone new
I try to do things
that keep my mind off of you

I try to forgive
I try to forget
I try to find love
but my hearts full of regret

the past cant be erased
it will always be there
Reminding me of you
and hoping that you'll care

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-12-27 06:09 PM

Welcome! what a very nice first presentation!
Some people are unforgettable.

ENJOY your stay at Passions!

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

2 posted 2005-12-27 09:54 PM

Welcome to PiP!

I like this. You pulled off the repetition nicely. I think the poem would be improved if you worked on the third stanza or cut it out all together.

Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing.

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Sexy
Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 53

3 posted 2005-12-28 12:24 PM

NICE 1st write......Welcome to PiP

eternal_echobassplayer
Junior Member

since 2005-12-28

Posts 12
Tx, USA

4 posted 2005-12-29 01:00 PM

This is a really good poem. I like it a lot!! Stay strong.

teedles
New Member

since 2005-12-28

Posts 7
VA, USA

5 posted 2005-12-30 11:04 PM

I can relate with your words! Sometimes you don't forget, you just learn to live on! Good Job!!

Never discourage anyone...who continually makes progress, no matter how slow. - Plato

Christioned
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

6 posted 2005-12-31 10:32 PM

Nice first post welcome to Pip. Normally I'm not one to like repetative poems; but every now and then someone pulls it off and it is good. Congradulations. Keep up the good work!

"It's my curse to constantly be in battle with Him."- Me

littlelauren
Junior Member

since 2005-12-30

Posts 25

7 posted 2006-01-01 09:31 AM

thats amazing, I hope u cn forget soon!
Lauren
xxxx

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

8 posted 2006-01-01 10:20 AM

Welcome to PIP!!!!!!

Please check your e-mail for a special surprise.

"...and as we drift along, I never fail to be astounded by the things we'll do for promises..."
Ronnie James Dio

intention
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA

9 posted 2006-01-02 08:04 AM

good one
welcome to pip..
shilpii

Love me for who i m

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

10 posted 2006-01-08 12:24 PM

i agree w/ savage about the third stanza but the poem is really good.~Laura

how did you break my heart when it wasn't whole to start?

aol sn- tearsoflove13762

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