Teen Poetry #7 |
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littlelauren Junior Member
since 2005-12-30
Posts 25 |
Why are you so afraid of showing me who you are why are you so fake with me why do you keep putting up a bar I would like to get to know the real you so stop being such a coward and let me know what you do I've know you now for quite a while only the fake you who tells me nout I can't take this no-more I want out! Show me the real you and I promise I will stay but unless you do I have to call it a day! |
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helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england |
hey. I knew someone like that..they either let you in or they dont but dont give up on them. Great poem,reminded me of my own past. Keep up the good work! |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
Uh...I hate when people act so fake. Why cant people just show the real side of them, I'll never know. Well, im not gonna bore u so...THANKS FOR THE POEM!!! keep up the great work! XxnoraxX |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
its so stupid! the being fake part not your poem. Why cant people just show how they really are? there should be a limit to shyness. ejoyed reading this Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
A limit to shyness? I admit that being fake is dumb! But there are some things where for the sake of not hurting other people you have to be… On to the poem though, it was very nice. Expressed a lot of how you feel about people sometimes, which I think is good. When a writer can convey their true feelings through to the reader so that the reader understands, it shows true talent! One quick thing though, what is, “who tells me nout”, “nout”, what does, “nout”, mean? I keep thinking it might mean, “no”, but I am not positive. Can you enlighten me on the meaning? @-->--- |
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