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the ocean |
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smiley New Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 9 |
k i think this one isnt that great either, but i wanted to see what other people thought and what advice i can get from you. This morning I awoke, refreshed and ready to start my day. I walked outside and heared the loud roar of the ocean beyond the sands so white. A gentle sea breeze hits my face and I look out onto the waves capped white with foam. When I look out at the waves curling and uncurling upon the rough sandy shore, I think of the animal life peacefully swimming below. Dolphins, sharks, octopus and more. Fish of ornage and blue galore! I take one last deep breath of the salty air, before I say goodbye and head home, where I will await another meeting with the ocean shore. i dont really like the ending either.  |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
like a fellow once said aint love a kick in the head. (this has been a misdirected thought by hatred) |
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