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littlelauren
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since 2005-12-30
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0 posted 2006-01-03 03:41 PM


I knwo you are hurting
in more ways than one
but you'll have to live with the scars
because what's done is done

But that doesn't mean you can't stop
because what you're doing is wrong
you're hurting everyone around you
we can see the scars

everyone is here for you
so don not be afraid
to come and talk to us
we'll give you a hug

we can try and make the pain dissapear
we all love you
more than you will ever know
so please just stop
put down the knife
and we'll walk away togeather
holding your life!

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Mysteria
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1 posted 2006-01-03 10:03 PM


I hope this poem makes it to the person for whom it is written.  This is a loving hand extended, and I hope they take it.
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-01-03 10:26 PM


ditto what Mysteria wrote
cutting hurts everyone

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