Teen Poetry #7 |
trying to be me again |
piecesofapicture New Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 4 |
here i am holding our picture in my hands the scared little girl you always knew i'm passing out the pieces of my shattered heart to anyone that'll listen to me cry because tonight every song screams out our names the look in my eyes can't be hidden i can't disguise the pain it doesn't matter at all you don't remember me anymore. |
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Lotta Lagg Junior Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 19Michigan |
Very nice. I felt your pain. ~ Lotta "One Oneness One" |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
WELCOME TO PIP!!!!!!!!! This is a very excellent write... I really look forward to reading more from you. Check your e-mail for a special surprise. "...and as we drift along, I never fail to be astounded by the things we'll do for promises..." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"because tonight every song screams out our names the look in my eyes can't be hidden i can't disguise the pain it doesn't matter at all you don't remember me anymore." ahha this one goes to the heart....well done! Welcome to Pip! |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
very heartfelt piece, nice write... Welcome to pIp "i said 'How bout a revelution' and he said 'Right' i said oh, you say ah, i say revelution and you say ja,That was the craziest game of poker" |
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