Teen Poetry #7 |
sad friend |
secreteyes Junior Member
since 2005-12-20
Posts 13Wisconsin, United States |
To her Alone and dark the world it seems Gone and broken are all her dreams Just Standing in the darkness She thinks this life is pointless Her heart has truly broken She thinks she is the token and now she only feels All the pain which she conceals Though a smile in the light She has only tears at night And now Hiding all her tears she stands in the crowd Wish she could just simply scream them out loud But she won’t she must hide Her hearts broken and died She thinks the pain is to much to bare And is just simply afraid no one will care For her heart and her soul she feels so bad, its takeing a toll she think she broke others hearts but it is only hers that’s in parts she may have done some bad but not enough to cause this much sad she does not deserve but she can not see what a good person she truly can be but though often my words are said they fall on silent ears wishing she was dead because she can not see with all her silent tears that many of us love her and care about her fears yet she feels she must just be strong can’t let us know somthings wrong she’s afraid to her we’ll turn against and use her weakness at our despense but for me I can truly say my friend ….. you know I will always stay and in your world wich seems so gray i hope happiness comes some day I can do no more then just sit here and pray That soon you will see that happy day |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
but though often my words are said they fall on silent ears wishing she was dead because she can not see with all her silent tears that many of us love her and care about her fears perfect i really liked it .. it has that feeling Love me for who i m |
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Sexy Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 53 |
love it, it is something that i would read over and over... |
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LOSTANDFORGOTTEN Junior Member
since 2005-12-22
Posts 16 |
tht was really good...i enjoyed it!! -Jess |
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eternal_echobassplayer Junior Member
since 2005-12-28
Posts 12Tx, USA |
This is really good!!! |
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