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secreteyes
Junior Member

since 2005-12-20

Posts 13
Wisconsin, United States

0 posted 2005-12-22 12:39 PM

To her Alone and dark the world it seems
Gone and broken are all her dreams
Just Standing in the darkness
She thinks this life is pointless
Her heart has truly broken
She thinks she is the token
and now she only feels
All the pain which she conceals
Though a smile in the light
She has only tears at night
And now Hiding all her tears she stands in the crowd
Wish she could just simply scream them out loud
But she won’t she must hide
Her hearts broken and died
She thinks the pain is to much to bare
And is just simply afraid no one will care
For her heart and her soul
she feels so bad, its takeing a toll
she think she broke others hearts
but it is only hers that’s in parts
she may have done some bad
but not enough to cause this much sad
she does not deserve but she can not see
what a good person she truly can be
but though often my words are said
they fall on silent ears wishing she was dead
because she can not see with all her silent tears
that many of us love her and care about her fears
yet she feels she must just be strong
can’t let us know somthings wrong
she’s afraid to her we’ll turn against
and use her weakness at our despense
but for me I can truly say
my friend …..
you know I will always stay
and in your world wich seems so gray
i hope happiness comes some day
I can do no more then just sit here and pray
That soon you will see that happy day

intention
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA

1 posted 2005-12-22 02:29 PM

but though often my words are said
they fall on silent ears wishing she was dead
because she can not see with all her silent tears
that many of us love her and care about her fears

perfect i really liked it .. it has that feeling

Love me for who i m

Sexy
Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 53

2 posted 2005-12-28 02:27 PM

love it, it is something that i would read over and over...

LOSTANDFORGOTTEN
Junior Member

since 2005-12-22

Posts 16

3 posted 2005-12-28 07:54 PM

tht was really good...i enjoyed it!!

-Jess

eternal_echobassplayer
Junior Member

since 2005-12-28

Posts 12
Tx, USA

4 posted 2005-12-29 12:56 PM

This is really good!!!

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