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Teen Poetry #7

Your Perfect Little Girl

Sexy
Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 53

0 posted 2005-12-15 04:19 PM

Ur perfect little girl yelled at u last night
Ur perfect little girl tried to keep ur secrets
Ur perfect little girl cries herself to sleep every
night.....

Ur perfect little girl dated before sixteen
Ur perfect little girl was always broken by a boy
Ur perfect little girl doesn't want to go to church......

Ur perfect little girl hates u......
Ur perfect little girl has given up on life
Ur perfect little girl want to run away to solve all her problems......

Ur perfect little girl hasn't let u wipe away her tears ......
Ur perfect little girl disobeys u
Ur perfect little girl hates the whole world......

Ur perfect little girl says bad things bout u
Ur perfect little girl is so un-happy
Ur perfect little girl has tried to commit suicide
Ur perfect little girl has become a disgrace....

U see now im not a perfect little girl at all,
but at the end of every day im still ur perfect
little girl.....

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

1 posted 2005-12-15 06:39 PM

Wow, this was so me in my teenage years. Very well written.

and Welcome!!!

AtLsHawTy17
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 60
IL,

2 posted 2005-12-17 12:13 PM

yea me too still is but i liked it good write

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2005-12-18 12:42 PM

if this is about you wow i hope ur ok and all... you will soon, as i did, realize that things get better and for certain ending you life isnt the thing to do read my poem entitled 12:00 thats how i felt...

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

4 posted 2005-12-22 10:57 PM

Interesting.

eternal_echobassplayer
Junior Member

since 2005-12-28

Posts 12
Tx, USA

5 posted 2005-12-29 01:05 PM

I really like this one, Totally reminds me of myself at around the age of 16 and 17. Stay strong!

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