Teen Poetry #7 |
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gtgurl New Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 1 |
I dreamed a good dream A little while ago We were sum how in the perfect park Holding hands walkn really slow I pointed out a withered rose whose thorns were still attached I saw the beauty in this flower although it wasn’t visible The many years of pain and sufferings the flower had to endure Made me stop and kneel down by this plant and pray As I sent my words up to the sky I realized how much the rose and I were alike I feel your arms wrap around me slowly consoling me I found beauty in sumthing that was withered and worn And in thinking of me I asked do you think I’m beautiful? You tell me I will always be beautiful as long as I live You say that my heart is pure and my ways are kind That the way I love and talk is so heavenly divine You say I love unconditionally and trust whole heartedly Jus sitting here right now is making him want me He said that my beauty jus isnt skin deep He said he simply loves me for just bn me My beauty is the truth, it flows thru and all around me he said. Jus as his lips touched mine I awoke from this wondrous dream Only to be back n my dark cold room, wishn for this dream |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome to Pip! ![]() Don't you just hate waking from those kinds of dreams?! It leaves me feeling so sad for the rest of the day... *please check your email for a special greeting! ![]() |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
You say I love unconditionally and trust whole heartedly nice ![]() Love me for who i m |
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
nice write welcome to pip! hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
really good write Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me |
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