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Leeds-Girl
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since 2005-12-07
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0 posted 2005-12-07 07:03 PM



Tell me why you do it
Tell me why you shout
Tell me why you ask questions
I know nothing about

Tell me why you hit me
Tell my why you swear
Tell my why you laugh
Why don’t you care?

Tell me why you taunt
Tell me why you tease
Tell me why you push me
Until im on my knees

Tell me why you can’t stop it
Before it’s too late
Tell me why you can’t stop
Before I walk through them gates

Tell me why you do this
Just because we aren’t the same
Tell me why you do this
It is not a game

Tell me why I have to leave
Tell me why my life is gone
Tell me why I have to cry
While you still sing you song.

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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-12-07 07:40 PM


That's some serious heartache. Leaving certainly seems like the right choice. You write very well. I pray all is well and that you find this a safe place to be. Welcome to Passions!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2005-12-07 07:59 PM


i agree with larry you are a very good writer and i hope everything gets better

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

punkrockerrobin
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3 posted 2005-12-16 09:01 PM


ok this one seriously brought tears to my eyes cus it had some hidden memories in it for me. nice write!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
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groove on sista!

DestinedSuccess
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since 2005-11-16
Posts 12
California,
4 posted 2005-12-17 01:15 AM


I am sorry you have to go through this, I hope one day you are strong enough to leave.. or if you already have, then you are stronger than most. Nice write
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