Teen Poetry #7 |
Tell me why? |
Leeds-Girl New Member
since 2005-12-07
Posts 8 |
Tell me why you do it Tell me why you shout Tell me why you ask questions I know nothing about Tell me why you hit me Tell my why you swear Tell my why you laugh Why don’t you care? Tell me why you taunt Tell me why you tease Tell me why you push me Until im on my knees Tell me why you can’t stop it Before it’s too late Tell me why you can’t stop Before I walk through them gates Tell me why you do this Just because we aren’t the same Tell me why you do this It is not a game Tell me why I have to leave Tell me why my life is gone Tell me why I have to cry While you still sing you song. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
That's some serious heartache. Leaving certainly seems like the right choice. You write very well. I pray all is well and that you find this a safe place to be. Welcome to Passions! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
i agree with larry you are a very good writer and i hope everything gets better LOVE NEEDS TO DIE |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ok this one seriously brought tears to my eyes cus it had some hidden memories in it for me. nice write! hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men! |
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DestinedSuccess Junior Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 12California, |
I am sorry you have to go through this, I hope one day you are strong enough to leave.. or if you already have, then you are stronger than most. Nice write |
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