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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2005-12-13 06:54 PM



They say love is the best medicine.
What happens when you overdose?
Huge swells will emerge from your eyes
and push themselves to the ground.
Your heart will run away and hide,
not wanting to ever be found.
You sit and wait for someone else to mend you
but it is your job to sew the cuts back together.
All  you wanted is for the pain to go away,
it has only gotten worse.
So you go looking for more love to finish you off.

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1 posted 2005-12-14 09:42 AM


hey nice one
i really like it

Love me for who i m

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2 posted 2005-12-14 04:51 PM


Laura~
Now this is an interesting take on overdosing~

I think I've done that a time or two in my years~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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tearsoflove13762
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3 posted 2005-12-14 05:02 PM


thank you both!

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

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