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ska babe
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since 2005-11-08
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nowwhere, IN

0 posted 2005-12-13 06:33 PM



When I see you, I smile and you smile back
When I look at you
You always seem to look back
When I loved you
I thought you loved me too
But looking back now I seem to be mistaken
For you love someone else
Someone beautiful, someone smart, someone that you deserve
Don’t worry about me I’ll be alright
I will just sit here with my broken heart
And cry all day and night
You will not notice and you will not care
For when I am gone you will not even remember I was there
But please do remember these words I say to you
I will love you forever and forever I still do

"I am the one who has to die when it's my time to die, so I'm gonna live life the way I wanna"- Jimi Hendrix

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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
1 posted 2005-12-13 06:55 PM


i loved the last line
intention
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since 2005-11-13
Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA
2 posted 2005-12-14 09:44 AM


amazing

Love me for who i m

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