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portorockfinest
New Member
since 2005-12-13
Posts 4
NJ, United States

0 posted 2005-12-13 03:37 AM


My mind is full of secret
thoughts and special dreams.

My heart is yours and yours is
mine.

My secrets are conceled
within my dreams.

Under the stars of endless
beauty your smile...

Brings me special ways to
endless light

And your kiss left me unmissed with the passions of love and endless beauty you bring

Our hearts become one and I
know your the one

To open the door to the love
in my heart

© Copyright 2005 John Doe - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-12-13 07:23 AM


Welcome to Pip!

I liked this first post of yours and hope to see more!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

SEA
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Member Seraphic
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Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2005-12-13 09:04 AM


this is really a lovely first post, welcome to Pip!

*please check your email for a special greeting!

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2005-12-13 09:42 AM


Jonathan~
Welcome to our poetic circle~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-12-13 04:06 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS JONATHAN!
Enjoyed your entrance piece..
Can't wait to see more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...  

tearsoflove13762
Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
5 posted 2005-12-13 05:18 PM


hello there
welcome to passions and this is a good first post and ill be looking for more

Laura

Sexy
Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 53

6 posted 2005-12-13 06:25 PM


good first write...

punkrockerrobin
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180
Sparks, NV
7 posted 2005-12-14 08:14 AM


very purdy!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr
groove on sista!

intention
Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59
New Delhi, INDIA
8 posted 2005-12-14 09:47 AM


hey good one
welcome to pip

Love me for who i m

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