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The Clock |
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Sexy Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 53 |
The clock slowly ticks, in my mind it ticks forever and ever, we said it was to be nothing more than what it was, it was to be nothing more than nights full of playing in the dark, talking over the phone, making out every time we met. The clock slows down as you and i say or last goodbyes, for now we are nothing more then friends. I was told to never mistake lust for love, in the begining of us i thought it was lust it wouldn't last, but now as i leave i slowly turn around and the tears start to fall. I cant leave you, i just cant i cant say goodbye cause i really do love you, you always have been mine even when you had a girl, we still were making out, and having sex, so how do i trun back around and say i'm going to stay with you. |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
Something true, its a very good write... |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
good write but kinda hard to read with the breaks and pauses off- set but perhaps thats what you had in mind -Laura |
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portorockfinest New Member
since 2005-12-13
Posts 4NJ, United States |
nice insight. i liked how it was written |
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