Teen Poetry #7 |
This Reads Like A Child's Book |
young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i'm a dreamer, sometimes my dreams are so vivid and transparent. like daylight in a movie at 9 in the night. i know that its not real, yet i swear that when i walk outside the sun will smile instead of wink. these dreams are life through the curtains. it is filtered, keeping the clouds obstructed while pure light shines into my lap. its the most silent waterfall. a pool of imagination. beneath the warmth of this visual bath lie rocks of reality. dashers of hope. people that drink out of the pool and never return to fill it up. all that sharing dries up the stream bed pretty fast. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was an extremely good piece of writing. Have you ever considered trying to write a short story for the prose section? I do think you would be very good - your visuals are very clear and concise. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i cant keep my mind focused enough to write prose. ...i swear i have ADD... |
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