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Teen Poetry #7

The Last Change

troublebreathing
New Member

since 2005-11-25

Posts 4

0 posted 2005-12-07 10:10 PM

As the humid air
Returns to the once dry, breathless
Shivers
I'm accustomed to,

The fear wraps my insides,
This goodbye
Will be the very last
We'll ever know,

And as I cast my silhouette
Upon the concrete,
Words fail me,
Only gasps
My tightly sewn mouth,

Yet again,
I allowed my covered wounds
To emerge,
Enabling them to trust,

The blame rests upon
Me,
For you,
A being
Who merely wipes away
His foggy windows,
Leaves the fault
To no one,
But me.

DejaEntendu
Member

since 2005-12-06

Posts 82
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2005-12-07 10:14 PM

wow
I really enjoyed this poem. I feel the same way sometimes, it's good to know someone may be experiencing what I go through. Thank you for helping me relate.

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