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Christioned
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

0 posted 2005-11-08 06:20 PM

So, my "friend", you may think
that you have all the answers,
you may think that you have all the "power"
to play and toy with peoples' lives as you please,
well just let me inform you
of what your "power" will truly bring:
Your "power" as I call it
will be your undoing.
One day you will mess around
with the wrong girls man.
On that day you will learn
that all I will tell you is true.
For now, yes you may get away
with all these little games you play,
you will continue to manipulate and cheat.
You will think that've won.
But let me tell you one thing, dear "friend":
That "power" you hold so dear,
will turn its' back on you.
And then you will be where I am now.
Looking at a former "friend"
and wandering how it all could be.
So, you see your "power" is useless,
it will only ultimatly bring you pain.

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2005-11-08 08:57 PM

insightful to a situation that alot of people face and very strong sense of opinion... good write, i enjoyed the read

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

Christioned
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

2 posted 2005-11-09 04:37 PM

Thanks. Lately I've been trying to put a voice to some of the things that people unfortunatly do have to go through. Just hopeing that I do them justice.

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

3 posted 2005-11-11 02:19 PM

doing good by my book. It is a tough task to find not even necessarily the 'right' words, but to find the right way to put it. Keep up the good work though

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

4 posted 2005-11-13 03:18 PM

Well done, if I do say so myself. Insightful, flowing, and an indepth analysis of this situation...that's what poetry is all about!

<3keryn

When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better.
Mae West

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-12-07 07:08 PM

Unfortunately, there are people that have to deal with just this type of thing,
and you wrote the tale of it well.

Enjoyed your write.

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