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That day |
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Leeds-Girl New Member
since 2005-12-07
Posts 8 |
Why did you have to leave me? Why did you have to go? You left me too early You left me on my own If only you were here Standing by my Side I wonder if that would make a change Clear All Those times I have cried. And if only I had listened to that time when you said You told me you needed me you said your life felt dead But I didn’t want to listen I didn’t want to here I didn’t want to lose you I wanted you so near Because you were my one The only one fore me if only If only I would have noticed how much you needed me But now it’s to late im left on my own I have no one to turn to I have no were to go but They did have to take you I couldn’t keep you here and now I realise That you were so dear |
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Leeds-Girl New Member
since 2005-12-07
Posts 8 |
Could people please reply i would really like to know what you think about my work and i would like to get some tips on making things better. thanks x |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
leeds, this forum is a slow moving forum, if you feel comfortable post your next poem in open? welcome to passions |
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