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Teen Poetry #7

Eternal Love

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-12-04 04:00 PM

My eternal love,
Come and join me in this dance,
One filled with sweet angels,
And heavenly romance,

Let me paint you,
Without any blemishes of this world,
Each stroke will capture your beauty,
Failing only when the paint depletes,

In the tales of the enchanted,
You eternally remain the beautiful princess,
And in my eyes, you’ll find the spark
Of a thousand Suns burning just for you,

Your compassionate gesture draws me near,
That I can’t help but give in,
Thinking of you and loving you,
Till God himself proclaims it as an obsession,

Even at the end of my life,
Your life gave so much to me,
That I mourn not a thousand deaths,
If I could see you for an instant…

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2005-12-09 09:56 PM

Now I am sure that you just described what would be an eternal love, and the character will of course see the object of their affection once more I am sure.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-12-09 10:14 PM

Ronil~
Like all you do, this is penned with such lovely romantic thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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