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AtLsHawTy17
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0 posted 2005-11-18 11:34 PM


I pretended to hold your hand yesterday, it felt good only for a second or two, then back to the reality I have to be jerked back into, because I feel I really really miss you.  The loneliness sometimes hurts so bad, the tears even hurt when I cry, for some odd reason you had to go, leaving me with only a goodbye.  A simple tear you couldn't wipe away, a simple frown you couldn't switch around, a simple wish you couldn't grant for me, and one simple heart you couldn't pick up off the ground... I pretended to hold your hand yesterday, it felt good to finally realize it's no longer there, reality is where I must stay, because the game of love is just not fair.
Let me know what ya'll think....

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

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AtLsHawTy17
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1 posted 2005-12-02 09:05 PM


anyone have an opinion

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

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